Redemption: Two (Not for Maddie)

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Me (Sanyu): Ok so I'm going to put this part to Raion because this is a bit more about him. www.youtube.com/watch?v=uOU26C… ) (Best song for this o 3 o ) ( Fact; This song kept me focus from both this and the last story, I've been listening to it for a total of 13 hours, and it doesn't get old for me :D ) ( You must play it at a certain part)
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Raion: *afters departing from me, he decided to head to Obinoxus* * The markings on his face grow, and dragon eyes straighten, and sees some Crisis Guards running towards him* *trys to take out his staff, but it won't come out of its casing* What the hell....... *cracks knuckles, and folds arm* *notices his arm folding and stops* *but can't help it* *his teeth grow sharper* *grinning* ONWARD! DON'T STOP
Horse: *gallops even faster*
Raion: *losing his calmness, and sanity* *and his old Warlord arm sheild* (There is a name for that, but I can't remember) *notices, and concern* No NOOO N- *losing himself, and his warself comes back* *his hairband breaks, and his hair is let out, he tears off the sleeves, and unbuttons it*
Horse: *slowing down*
Raion: KEEP MOVING FORWARD!
Horse: *galloping even faster, and notices fire surround its feet, its worried but keeps galloping, but it doesn't burn it*
Raion: *his hair rises like it was a fire itself,  and charges straight forward* Dragon Army Charge! *the fire aura around him burns brighter, and notices the area is being scorched, and grins* I'm going to dominate this land, all for myself AHAHAHA
Horse: *starting to have its' skin burnt, and is dying, but still Galloping*
Raion: *does notice, nor bother to care*
Horse: *stopping, from the heat, and scorches..dying....dying....dead*
Raion: *gets off of it, and angerily looks at it*
Horse: *the only sight it say was fire, a fury face, red, the black.....*
Raion: Disgraceful....I'm going to have to do this on my own *Skin turning red* *and running through the crowd, and if you were in a top view position, then you'd see a blazed line crossing straight through a purple sea* *charging, through with his martial arts, and jumps on a few of their heads, which melt clean off, and he flys off with the red fire propulsion, and heads to Obinoxus to rule it.
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Moni: Dad! Look i found this guy on the ground D:
Sheldon: ..g.et....off.....me...
Moni: *drops him* = n =
Syn: *picks him up, and leans him against a wall* Are you alright?
Obinoxia:....your...eyes...looks dea...dly.....who are you....
Syn: Just A Father, and a Sir, We heard about this, and came by as soon as we could.
Obinoxia:....if your gonna do something, I need you to protect the gates, I need someone here for my aide
Moni: *already left*
Syn: *about to run after him, but can't leav him, but aware Moni can take care of himself* Its up to you kiddo...
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Moni: Well I haven't been in a fight in a real long time, I don't wanna be rusty *his shadow becomes a horse, and has a shadow armor guarding him* VE LLAMO!
Shadow Horse: *Rappidly gallops uphill* *gets out of the first Gate of Obinoxia, but when he sees it, its burning, and setting a blaze...*
Moni: Oh crap....*jumps off his horse, and the horse vanishes, and formed over shadow people to go put out the fires* Go get the fire put out, and rescue any survivers *running to where the commotion is and sees a aura of fire, and sees what looks like Raion, but shadier, and malicious*
Moni: Uncle Raion
Raion: *can't hear him*
Moni: Uncle Raion! Stop!
Raion: *still demolishing, and can;t hear him*
Moni: *giant Shadow shrouds over the area between Moni, and Raon, and it hardens as some dome*
Raion: *grunting, and turns around, and if you see him, you can't see his pupils or corneas* RAAAH *a thunderous rawing*
Moni: Why are you doing this
Raion: *his fist genrating fire, and smashes his fist into the ground causing the ground with under to erupt, and break and somehow some sort of cavern was under them*
*both falling, and Raion, landing on his feet with a boom to the ground, and Moni, with his armor helmet breaking*
Raion: .....its you......and why have you stopped me from my conquest *folds arms*
Moni: Because this isn't your L- *in pain from the landing* Damn it.....*gets up* I'm going to stop you, and make you stop thinking like an idiot, *tightens his glove*  
Raion: go on and try...
Moni: *a chakram comes from his hand*  *runs to him, sperates the chakrams, and forms shaodws to follow the chakrams cuts*
Raion: *defensive stance, and deflecting the two chakrams, and deflecting rapidly the other shaodw attacks*
Moni: *hiding amongst the chakrams, deformed back to human, and about to head to Raion to cut his back*
Raion: *catches him, Raion himself became a few times bigger, and more muscular than he normal looked, and was crushing Moni with his left arm* I'll show you your place, your street rat *drops him till his head was vunerable, and holds it, crushing it, and throwing him to a stone wall*
Moni: *opening his eyes, and sees a fist about to strike him, and takes that massive hit*
*the whole stone wall of the cavern crumbles* *with Moni, barried under the rumble*
*Raion walking away from the mess* *A black light illumnates, and Moni stands' with half of his face torn, showing his shadow face*
(Now www.youtube.com/watch?v=uOU26C…, if you have well imagery this part will suite you very well)
Moni: Alright, old man, I'm going now show you how to really kick someones ass *grins* this place...Obinox itself, is a realm of insanity....weird, this isn't new, and what I will show new here is the Shadow Dragon *charkram illumnates black, and is being tosed in the sky, and a thin beam coming from the sky strikes through it, and  forms a Dragon, and Moni is riding it*
Moni: Boss Shadow Dragon's Fury *the dragon rushing to the sky, and becoming bigger, from asorbing shadows near the fire, and big enough to strike Raion down, but he struck to early and rockets it down* *the  Cavern is Shot down with a massive wave of shadow force, Raion is holding his ground, and inhales the whole time, and shoots a massive flame, the shadow are fading fast from this light that burns it very easily* *Moni, get burned in the process, but is not dead* *Raion looking down at him, and curb stomps him into the ground*
Raion: You waste my time, but not enough for me to waste your breathe....live on you flea.... *walks away, and flies out of the cavern*
Raion: *starts walking leaving a trail of fire with him*
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MidnightTheAngel's avatar
Poor Raion I hope he returns to normal soon.. I really like this story. the music was perfect for the last part!